Thursday, January 05, 2006

WIP - Captive Hero - Day 5



CAUTION - POSSIBLE SPOILERS

Chapter Two

First scene - Taylor's Pov

Taylor's in pain. Every inch of his body hurts as he is forced to walk on his injured leg behind the wagon transporting the luscious Hero woman...he sees the sympathy in her eyes for him...he also sees desire raging there compliments of the "machine"...He wants her bad..knows she needs to be satisfied or she will go crazy...he also knows they are heading for Death Valley...knows that the Death Valley Boys will addict her to sex in no time flat...just as they'd addicted Queen Jasmine to the same fate...and now the ex-Queen can't go without for longer than several hours. :-0 He can't let that happen to Kayla...

Second scene - Kayla's POV

Kayla's so aroused (due to some interesting contraptions attached to her) that she just can't sleep! Suddenly a shadowy figure appears at the wagon. It's Taylor! He's escaped!!! And he's come to get her!!! Without releasing her from her bound hands, Taylor grabs her and leads her from the wagon...

Hmmm I'm only at 3,000 words and have done 2 chapters...grrr...lots of room for polishing on the next round. This is just a fast first draft...

Man! It's hard to keep going and not stopping to polish!!! But I must press onto Chapter Three...

Later,
jan

2 Comments:

Blogger Sherrill Quinn said...

Don't worry 'bout the polish, Jan. Just get it all out there and then go back and add in more goodies.

That's great advice, ain't it? Too bad I can't seem to follow it myself...

3:06 PM  
Blogger Jan Springer, Erotic Romance Author said...

LOL.
I'm glad to hear I'm not the only one. :-)

jan

3:29 PM  

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